Bogmyrtle- Author #326001

betabookworm - Short Story review of Bogmyrtle - Author #326001

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* Does the story begin with an interesting hook or make you want to read more? Why or why not?

* Do the characters feel three-dimensional/real? Why or why not?

* Are the descriptions vivid/give a clear sense of time and place? Why or why not?

* Is the dialogue believable and natural, especially for a teenager? Why or why not?

* What other comments or suggestions do you have to help improve the story? If nothing, what did you like best about the story?

* How interested would you be in reading this story if it was a novel?